Good Work
:Review:
I really enjoyed this although there were some parts obviously ripped from other shows. A few examples include the whole team rocket "blasting off again" statement, another saying that Mario became "a super Mario" (derived from super saiyans), and the whole "bring friends (toad) back to life" statement was a bit corny...
:Improvements:
Try to use more original quotes. Try panning around the stage of the flash to add an even greater sense of epicness...
:Across The Board:
A very enjoyable flash for those who have patience and like to read.
~XS°~